Short storyish
Planning to write a short story about the troubles of living in a utopian society in your head.
Here’s a quick synopsis.
What if you can forget your troubles, your tribulations and start afresh?
What if you can enter a utopian world where happiness is the only thing present?
And what if you can stay there forever?
In the distant future, mankind are able to travel into an alternate world by linking their minds into a machine. In this world they forget who they are and live a new life, but by doing so they leave their soulless body behind. Meanwhile in reality, things have been chaotic. Towns are desolate, isolated lumps of concrete without a person in sight. There is a need for doctors, engineers and many other professions, but the conscious population is already scarce.
A group of specialists band together to remind the people in the alternative world that they are not real, to convince them back to Earth. But what happens if they, the special team, do not want to return to reality either.
Thus the story begins…
someone help me brush up on my writing please.
